Students Have Many Stresses
1.Most of the students are suffer stree because of their parents.
Parents request their children good scores on eximantion. If they didn't have good scores, they will be scolded or be forced to a creamschool. Some students don't like it; therefore, parents' expectation may have negative effet on their children.
2.Teacher's teaching method has a significant impact on student's learning activites and comprehension. Because students can't catch up with the classmates and if don't ask questions of friends or teacher for help, questions are piled up day after day. The questions causes students not to study.
3.Some students has good acadamic performance but someone do not good social skill. A birthmark may result in bad social. If I have no good friends, I will not want to school because I'm alone.
posted by teracy1296 at 5:19 AM
1 Comments:
Well done!
Good analysis and examples!
If will be great if you can add an introduction paragraph and a conclusion paragraph to make it a complete essay!
Most of the students are suffer stree because of parents.
-->suffer from stress becuase of their parents.
suffer:
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=79629&dict=CALD
The reason for parents request their children good scores on eximantion.
-->request: http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=67121&dict=CALD
-->Parents request...
If they didn't have good scores, they will be scolded or be forced to a creamschool. Some students don't like it; therefore, effet is not very good.
-->effect (check spelling!)
-->therefore, parents' expectation may have negative effect on their chidlren.
Teacher's teaching method leads to student's learning activites and comprehension.
-->...leads to (使用lead to 的語意是某事導致了令一件事) 教師的教學方法導致學生學習活動和理解 好像比較不順 可以改為: 教師的教學方法對學生理解有重要的影響
Teacher's teaching methods has a
significant impact on...
Because students can't catch up with the classmates and don't ask questions of friends or teacher, questions are piled up day after day.
-->...some students...and if they don't ask friends or teachers for help, ...
Some students has good acadamic performance but someone has not good social.
-->some do not have good social skills
A natural mark result in bad social.
-->natural mark?
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