Saturday, October 28, 2006

There Are Many Fruits in Taiwan

Taiwan produce the largest numbers of different type of fruit in the world. I like to eat fruit. I'm happy because Taiwan has many different kinds of fruits. Fruits are execllent natural foodbecause it is not artificial. A kind of fruit has special elements. Orange is aplenty of Vitamine C. It is not only delicious but nutritious as well. If I eat it, I could avoid getting flu. It is proverb" An apple a day keep doctor away." In my opinions, an apple is a good idea to choose. It is very hot in summer in Taiwan, if I eat a slice of watermelon and I will get cool and not thirsty immediately. Watermelon is good food especially when it is sultry. A carambola is top of goods for you throat. If I will a teacher or singer, I will eat it more than others. A doctor always suggest we eat every different fruits every day,don't be picky and don't eat it too much. In summary, it is beneficial for our health.

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Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

Which one is your topic sentence?
Color it and make sure all other sentences are related to the topic!


Taiwan has the most fruit in the world.
-->Taiwan produce the largest numbers of different type of fruit in the world.

-->Taiwan has a great variety of fruit.


Fruits are execllent food at natural because it is not artificial.
-->excellent natural food...


Watermelon is good food especially at sultry.
-->when it is sultry.


A doctor always suggest we eat every fruits every day,don't pick it up and don't eat it too much.
-->every different fruit

-->don't be picky...



In summary, it is beneficial and superior for our health.
-->superior?

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