A Letter To My Friend
Dear July
How are you doing? I haven't had a letter for you for a long time. I don't know how about your doing recently. We both attend universary. I think we are more busier than before,so we couldn't even write a letter to each other.
It is nice and clean. It will be Mid-autum Festival tomorrow. Generally, people will have a barbecue with families or friends, and I am not exceptional. How about your job? I know your job is at nightmarket. Because of your job, you have to work at nightmarket at the night. It is a hard job because you have to work from night to midnight on weekend. However,you should take care of yourself healthy. Please! I also have a part-time job. It is vital and difficult to managage time well and it is a skill that can't be taught by terchers. Learning how is manage time well can be a usefull skill in our life forever.
Now, I go back to school for studying.I ride a motocycle to shcool for ten and more minutes after off duty.Classmates are generous and considerate. My life is colorful.I should keep up with my classmates at acadmic performance.I hope have a good friendship in two years.
By the way, it is getting cooler in autum. Remember to put on your clothes or a coat.
Best Wish
your friend
Teracy

1 Comments:
more busier-->delete 'more'
so we couldn't keep in having a letter.
-->couldn't even write letters to each other.
It is nice and clean weather.
-->It is nice and clear. (delete 'weather')
Gerenerally-->check spelling
hard job-->a hard job
yourself healthy->take care of your health
It is vital and difficult to control time that it can't be taught by terchers. To control time is other skills in our life forever.
-->to manage time well and it is a skill that can't be...
-->learning how is manage time well can be a useful skill...
It is colorful in my life.
-->My life is colorful.
It is getting cool in autum.
-->getting cooler
Remember put on your clothes or coat
-->Remember to put on...
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